نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس با نمره 9

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس با نمره 9

Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society.

These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children,s health and as such are not

needed. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary

despite some potential risks.

 

Parents  have always been wary of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried about

Injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents

naturally feel protective of their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of

children unfortunately reacting adversely to their injections. These few instances have bolstered

existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than

the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself.

 

Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are unnecessary and

Dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast numbers of deaths over

hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of deaths so far prevented far

outweighs the number of children who have been adversely affected by the immunisations

themselves. Some diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination

campaigns. Overall, the idea that vaccinations are unnecessary and dangerous is ill-informed and

dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to a far worse outcome for society.

 

This essay argued that people who are against vaccination have a flawed understanding of

Vaccinations and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion, vaccinating

Children is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small and occasional risk

Involved.


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